I guess so, but even with that it still feels like, out of place (plus i never plan to do a scene like that ever again anyways lol)
Idk, i just feel like it’s weird and would turn off first time readers
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heraldinthedark said: I mean, it’s not a deal breaker. By the time you get to it, you’re invested in the story.
aynine-a9 said: It’s a fair bit into the story, so if they’re not hooked–and that turns them off–they probably weren’t going to keep going by then.
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